I really like the new format of roundtable to discuss our studies.
It enables us to receive much more peer feedbacks than before. And we also have
more interaction with our peers. Here are some valuable feedback from peers and
instructor:
1. Based on the data collected and due to the constrain of research
method, it's better rephrase the first and second research question. For
example, change the first research question from "How do online instructor
perform when providing feedback?" to "What do online instructors do
when they providing feedback?"
2. Rephrase the sub-headings of literature review section. Avoid
using heading such as "Define Online Learning".
3. I should have more citations and references for the literature
review part.
4. It's better to use tables/charts to summarize the statistic part
of the findings. It will be easier for the audience to understand.
5. It would be better to use pseudonym name for the participants in
findings and discussion part so that the audience can match statements with
participants, which they cannot do when the author just use "a
participant" or "one of the instructors" to represent the
participants.
6. It's important to have a conclusion part after
"Discussion" so that the audience won't get lost in all the findings
and discussions.
7. Avoid using indirect quote or citation. It's always better to use
first hand resource when it's possible.
8. I should explain and cite the terminologies that the audience
might not be familiar with, such as "interview survey",
"cognitive interview", and "constant comparative method",
etc.
I really appreciate all the
comments, suggestions, and questions from my peers and instructor.
